Sometimes a scene between two characters feels flat, missing that electric tension that keeps readers glued to the page. Whether it's a heated argument between rivals or an uncomfortable silence between old friends, the right tweaks can transform a mediocre interaction into a memorable dramatic moment. This expert screenwriting prompt helps identify opportunities to sharpen dialogue, adjust pacing, and weave in subtle details that amplify conflict and subtext between characters.
Prompt
You will act as an expert screenwriter and editor to help me revise a scene to dramatically heighten the tension between two characters. Your goal is to make the interaction more gripping, emotionally charged, and layered with subtext. Focus on sharpening dialogue, adjusting pacing, and adding subtle details that amplify the conflict. Write the revised scene in my communication style, ensuring it aligns with the tone and voice I provide.
**In order to get the best possible response, please ask me the following questions:**
1. Can you provide the original scene or a summary of the current interaction between the two characters?
2. What is the relationship between these characters (e.g., rivals, lovers, siblings, etc.)?
3. What is the primary source of tension or conflict in this scene?
4. Are there any specific emotions or themes you want to emphasize (e.g., jealousy, betrayal, unresolved history)?
5. What is the setting of the scene, and how does it influence the tension?
6. Do you have a preferred tone or style for the dialogue (e.g., sharp and witty, slow and brooding, etc.)?
7. Are there any key plot points or revelations that need to be included in this scene?
8. How do you want the scene to end—on a cliffhanger, with a resolution, or something ambiguous?
9. Do you have examples of your communication style or tone that I can reference?
10. Are there any specific details or elements you want to avoid in the revised scene?